I was
recently writing a scene in one of my stories that took place in a barn. My
first inclination was to have one of my characters plop herself down on a
convenient hay bale, since those have been commonplace in livestock barns since
time immemorial, right? Well, actually ... no. I started to think. How is hay
baled anyways? Is it something that people have ever done by hand? Hay bales,
as we know them, are tightly compressed and bound together by something called
baling wire. Would it be possible to produce something like that before
sophisticated machinery, whether steam powered or hand cranked, started to make
its appearance somewhere in the mid 1800s? A little research revealed that the
hay press (or hay baler) wasn't invented until the 1850's, and the modern 'pick
up' or 'square' baler wasn't invented until the 1940's. So those square hay
bales that we all take for granted as a prop for square dances really didn't
make their appearance until relatively modern times. In light of this, it is amazing how many
fantasy novels that are set in ostensibly medieval or Renaissance era worlds
make passing mentions to hay bales.
This is not
to say that a fantasy world needs to parallel the history of western Europe in
the timing of its inventions. Part of the fun of writing fantasy is the ability
to mix and match from different times and places in history as well as being
able to come up with things that have never existed at all. The expansion of
the genre to include intentionally anachronistic amalgamations of different
periods in history, with or without magic as an added catalyst, has allowed a
variety of interesting settings, including all the variations of 'punk' that
have been popping up. If you write a story in one of these settings, you are
assisted by the presence of certain 'norms' and conventions that frame a
reader's expectations.
But if you
are trying to create a unique world that doesn't fit any of the pre-existing
subgenres within fantasy, some thought may be in order as to what you're
including and why. It is not inconceivable that someone could have developed an
early prototype of a hay press in a pre-industrial society. After all, Queen
Elizabeth had a flush toilet (as did some people in Ancient China and Minoan
Crete). The Romans, of course, had bathhouses and aqueducts and fairly
sophisticated sanitation, and the Bronze
Age Indus
Valley cities of Harappa and Mohenjo-Daro actually had
very sophisticated running water systems. And the myriad of social and
religious institutions that existed in the ancient world are simply staggering.
However, a writer needs to be aware that many readers have a default
expectation that a 'traditional' high fantasy setting will be essentially
medieval.
If you are
going to portray something in your world that some readers might question, it
is probably a good idea to at least have it be something that the society could
ostensibly support at its current level of organization. It is reasonable for a
society to start using buttons as fastenings for clothes much earlier than our
culture did, for instance, but perhaps it is less reasonable for people to have
zippers.
So when
deciding what sorts of day to day technologies and conveniences people in your
world may have access to, don't be afraid to be innovative, but keep an eye to
how you will make the presence of these things plausible to your readers in the
context of the world and society you have built.
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Excellent post!
ReplyDeleteThe difficulty I have encountered in my world building is how to make it environmentally friendly and feasible in a medieval setting. It's a bit tricky.
Thanks--those runaway threads on FWO can be inspiring :)
ReplyDeleteExcellent post. I decided to give my world the printing-press before they had gunpowder - because I could. Though my "default comfort zone" is probably less mediaeval than a cross between Classical and Renaissance.
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